Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts

July 19, 2014

Five Minute Friday:: Belong

One of my favorite bloggers, Lisa-Jo Baker, gave this prompt last week, and I jotted the following poem down in ragged spare minutes that never unfolded into enough time to actually post. Usually, she gives the 1-word prompt late Thursday night, and a community of bloggers around the globe take 5 minutes to simply write--no editing or re-thinking allowed! Then we post our links and leave encouragement on each other's blogs.

I'm too late to join the party this week, so this one almost stayed in the draft pile, but my hubby encouraged me to publish it anyway.

I remembered truth as I wrote. I remembered that this--the universal longing for belonging--is an ache whose remedy was costly, but was given freely. We can rest here.

Prompt: Belong


We ache and we long
to belong.

Every middle-aged teen
and geriatric child
and stodge-faced youth
will understand.

Long after parents
are gone
is the ache to be welcomed,
havened,
cuddled close and long
and told
You are mine.

We ache and we long
to be loved.

Every Joe-Doe-Blow,
perfectionista,
and black-faced sheep
will understand.

And when the shape of it
unclouds,
it's the want to be seen,
admired,
heard deep, understood
and told
You have worth.

He aches and He longs
to gather us.
He rises with compassion
to show.
It throbs deep
and pours out red
with costly welcome
for every middle-aged teen
geriatric child
stodgy youth
Joe-Doe-Blow
perfectionista
and black-faced sheep.

You are mine. 
I gave you worth. 

April 19, 2013

Sodom's Crime

Death is a taker, not a giver. The taking it has done this week in Boston, and last night in West, TX, have made me sit weeping in my car for the moms, the spouses, the kids who are reeling in the aftermath.



Always receiving, but never giving, salt seas are dead too.

Dead and briny, like the tears in Boston and West after the taking.

Salty and barren like a little ghost town once called Sodom.

Sodom. We always peg it for its sodomy. (Ever wonder where the name came from?) Yes, Sodom had sexual sin, but that was not the crime that fit them for destruction.

The crime was taking-without-giving.

They hoarded wealth like a salt sea hoards water.

Small-town Sodom was full of gluttons. It was full of excess, of waste, of shutting eyes to the poor and plugging ears against compassion that would cost them comfort.

I had never known this, never realized that this was why God destroyed it, but there it was, in the middle of a rant against Israel, (who apparently was worse than Sodom!):

"...this was the guilt of your sister Sodom: she and her daughters had pride, excess of food, and prosperous ease, but did not aid the poor and needy. ...So I removed them." (Ezekiel 16:48-50 ESV)

Sound like any place you know?

I'm not bringing this up so I can stand on my soapbox against America's wealth, her ease and prosperity, or her greed.  No, I'm bringing this up because I'm guilty.

I have shut my eyes. I have closed my ears. I have snapped my checkbook closed too many times when I knew He would have counted it as a personal gift to Him.

When I receive without giving, I am like like a salt sea: deader with every drop.

"Truly I say to you, as you did not do it to one of the least of these, you did not do it to me." (Matt 25:45) - Jesus

He, the Ultimate Giver, is supremely alive.

I received and began to live. Now when I give, His life is expressed sweet, full. I have life to the full.




As I was chewing on the passage in Ezekiel, I started journaling a prayer out of desperation and frustration with how similar I was to Sodom. This poem was the result.



Rescue me from wealth
the consuming
and grasping 
and wasting
of things
unnecessarily bought
and garaged
and shelved
while their bellies bloat.

Save me from success
the endless striving
comparing 
and lifting
of self
unconscionably proud 
discontent
and anxious
lest the accolades stop.

Ransom me from passion
for those worthless
and emptying
pursuits
unbearably hollow
preoccupying
distracting
from the Life that truly lives.